【作文你來寫，我來評】免費考研英語作文測評活動結束

cxdyhr · 發表于 2014-10-18 16:10

作文隨手寫，老師來評分！

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weijia89 · 發表于 2014-10-18 16:15

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weijia89 · 發表于 2014-10-18 16:40

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陌涵沫 · 發表于 2014-10-18 17:02

好棒啊，我也要寫一個，求老師指導~~

于紫兒 · 發表于 2014-10-18 17:05

As is vividly shown in the first picture, along the road walked a beautiful young girl who is in a fashion dress, throwing the banana peels at her disposal though a dustbin lies beside her. While in the second picture, a crippled man with a crutch harshly picked the banana skin the girl throwed. The caption reads, beauty is far beyond your appearance. We are informed that the different behaviors are not consist with the their appearance .
The aim of the drawing is to tell us that inner character is far important than appearance and due attention has to be paid towards the inner qualities.In the first place, although fascinating appearance can brings instant praises, once you behave like the girl in the cartoon and lack of good characters, people will definitely stay far away from you. It is inner quality that people really values when they treat someone and interact with them. In the second place, excellent characters can brings you opportunities in work, arouses your reputation among your collegues and enables you to make achievements in your life.In a word, nice qualities plays a vital role in everyone's life.
Hence,it is imperative to draw people's attention to the cultivation of the good characters like friendliness, kindness, modesty and confidence. For one thing, propogation of inner quality cultivation should be promoted not only in schools but also in communities. For another,typical good behaviors must be encouraged and rewarded. Only in this way can we form a harmonious society and have a bright future!

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