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小黑Phoebe · 發(fā)表于 2014-10-19 13:16

請(qǐng)問大家有人發(fā)過了嗎？為什么我想發(fā)作文一直提示有不良信息所以發(fā)不了？求幫忙

lianchengjue · 發(fā)表于 2014-10-19 13:26

fighting

SundayLHH · 發(fā)表于 2014-10-19 13:31

Wearing a stylish dress and sunglasses,the girl in the first picture looks quite fashionable and charming. While, astonishingly,she readily discarded a banana skin on the ground. By striking contrast, the crippled man in the second picture went to pick up that banana skin , in spite of much physical unconvenience.

For a long period of time, people's worship of exquisite appearance and graceful figure, has resulted in a fading attention of the inner beauty, the girl in the above picture is a perfect example, whose uncivilizd behavior hugely overshadowed her good-looking face. For the girl and her alike, proper advice is: beauty should not be regarded superficially as one's external feature or dressing,but a truly sincere good heart and elevated manners.Undoubtedly, the virtue revealed in the second picture is what we should highly extol and encourage.

The worrisome situation in the society suggests that positive measures are badly needed.Hence the schools should teach the youth to establish a correct outlook on beauty, making them realize that ones attraction lies not in appearance, but in a golden heart. Meanwhile the government should act forcefully on the preach of traditional virtues.Were every individual place a high value on inner beauty, we would likely to move towards a harmonious society.

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wstwst1994 · 發(fā)表于 2014-10-19 13:32

英語(yǔ)一，謝謝老師

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wstwst1994 · 發(fā)表于 2014-10-19 13:33

wstwst1994 發(fā)表于 2014-10-19 13:32
英語(yǔ)一，謝謝老師

為啥上傳不了圖片

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SundayLHH · 發(fā)表于 2014-10-19 13:37

SundayLHH 發(fā)表于 2014-10-19 13:31
Wearing a stylish dress and sunglasses,the girl in the first picture looks quite fashionable and cha ...

英語(yǔ)一 ^O^

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陳一角 · 發(fā)表于 2014-10-19 15:45

英語(yǔ)一

冰雪的嘆息 · 發(fā)表于 2014-10-19 15:46

作文我來寫，你來評(píng) （英語(yǔ)）

希望老師能給指導(dǎo)點(diǎn)評(píng)，謝謝O(∩_∩)O

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haru11 · 發(fā)表于 2014-10-19 17:13

謝謝！請(qǐng)?jiān)u論。*^_^*

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enzo牛 · 發(fā)表于 2014-10-19 17:19

作文隨手寫，老師來評(píng)分，英語(yǔ)二

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