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云亦然G · 發表于 2014-10-19 19:40

搞定一篇，，靜等吐槽，，，

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章震宇cafa · 發表于 2014-10-19 19:41

作文隨手寫，老師來評分（英語一），感謝老師指教。

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云亦然G · 發表于 2014-10-19 19:44

作文隨手寫，老師來點評
英語一

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章震宇cafa · 發表于 2014-10-19 19:45

作文隨手寫，老師來評分（英語一），上張不清楚，再傳一張，麻煩老師了。

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向日葵yi · 發表于 2014-10-19 19:54

我的作文沒法提交，怎么辦、

向日葵yi · 發表于 2014-10-19 20:21

作文隨手寫，老師來評分（英語一）

云亦然G · 發表于 2014-10-19 20:23

【作文隨手寫，老師來評分】英語一
There are two pictures above.The left one reveals a beautiful girl who is throwing a banana skin while eating a banana.And a garbage can behind her.The right pictures shows a disability man with a walking stick picked it up to the can.The caption under the pictures illustrates that beautiful is not just on the face.
From the pictures,we may come to understand that the painter is trying to convey a deep concern about the lack of moral cultivation.besides,painter also wants to warn us that the phenomenon may be commomplace in our society.People just want to make life easier to themselves but do a damage to society.Owing to we didn’t have a high standard of moral.
Measures should be taken to enhance nations’ moral cultivation.First,the public should cultivate a good manner in public place.Second,society should disseminate more positive examples.We are agreement beautiful is not beauty,beauty of mind is beautiful.Everyone has a beautiful mind,we can really build a healthy and beautiful society.

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laaaancy · 發表于 2014-10-19 20:42

不知道可以不

南瓜愛 · 發表于 2014-10-19 20:52

作文詞匯句型還沒背呢

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luningjiayou · 發表于 2014-10-19 21:05

我要參加！

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