【作文你來寫，我來評】免費考研英語作文測評活動結束

昭夜 · 發表于 2014-10-19 19:02

龍呼晴發表于 2014-10-18 15:22
為么我發作文帖子說我包含不良信息，我是大大的良民呢

我也是。。。圖片發不了，內容包含不良信息。。。簡直沒救了

昭夜 · 發表于 2014-10-19 19:04

龍呼晴發表于 2014-10-18 15:33
天，是disabled 噗，重傷

我去。。不良信息是什么意思，，我總是發布上去。。

我不知會遇見lee · 發表于 2014-10-19 19:06

作文隨手寫，老師來評分英語一
   The two cartoons feature a shark constract between two  people's perspectives on litters .In the first picture,a charming girl who wears a beautiful dress and a pair of cool sunglasses,throwing the banana skin anywhere rather than the garbage can in spite of it is extremely close to her.Conversely,in the second picture,a disabled man who only has one leg picking up the banana skin thrown by the beautiful girl into the garbage can.What a ironically thing.As the caption says,beauty is not on the surface.
   The deeply revealing cartoons are aimed at exposing the rampant growth of decline in moral values in recent China.That is to say,more and more Chinese pay attention to their appearance rather than the inner beauty.In fact,inner beauty plays an significant role when evaluated by others in your lifetime.Outer beauty is temporary while inner beauty is eternal.
      Each of us is supposed to draw attention to the inner beauty instead of the appearance.Ineer beauty including environmental consciousness,accommodating,respect the old and cherish the yong and other chinese traditional moral values.From my perspective,school should add some moral classes to improve students' self-cultivation.As another key player in the issue,government should provide encouragement and rewarding for the sake of cultivating the inner beauty.

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