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ann09810128 · 發表于 2014-10-19 23:42

As is showing in the picture, the girl throws the garbage on the road who has the pretty appearance and the man who is just has one leg picks up the garbage after her. Certain informative implication is revealed in picture above. Sometimes we will find the beauty is inherent, not seemingly.
No one could have failed to notice the fact which is the picture showing that the cute person always doing uncivil things and the truly beauty is inner beauty. Numerous cases exist to illustrate this point, with the following one being the foremost, the best beauty teacher in china who is use her action conquer all people, not face.
As far as I am concerned, if we just care about the appearance instead the beautiful tradition action, we will always miss the beauty. On the one hand, it is imperative that the essence be absorbed and the drawbacks be neglected. On the other hand, we should raise the awareness that action beauty is true. Only in this way can benefit us in a more proper way.

ann09810128 · 發表于 2014-10-19 23:42

發帖的主題選社么啊？

我很酷我會飛 · 發表于 2014-10-20 00:26

wstwst1994 · 發表于 2014-10-20 00:37

謝謝老師，英語一
A gorgeous lady, dressing in beautiful skirt, is peeling banana, and then throw it to the ground without any hesitation. And she completely keep blind eye to the cabin near by her and leave with relaxed steps. After a while, a young man who is a handicapped pick up the peel with slow and shivered move. We can learn from the picture that beauty not only existed in appearance.
No clear-cut distinction can be drawn between the lady’s appearance and the man’s soul. Such similar cases can be found in our daily life. For instance, we always say that ”A friend indeed is a friend in need ”. When you are in an upward situation, all kinds of friends will surround with you. However, only true friend will stay with you even when you are in need. Judging a true friend requires us not to be deceived by the superficial phenomena. Instead, we should recognize and see through it.
It is difficult to the point of impossibility to judge someone right away, which means we should not make judgment at first glance. Only after a comparative long time period of interaction can we finger out what kind of person he is.

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FUTURE_MIAO · 發表于 2014-10-20 02:55

In the first picture,we can learn that a young lady,wearing a fashionable costume which adds charm to her beautiful appearance,is throwing a banana peel casually.On the contrary,in the second picture,a disabled man is painfully picking up a banana peel in order to keep the ground clean.And below the drawing,there is a topic which says:the beauty is not a surface matter.
What lies behind the picture is clear:the inner beauty is of greater significance than the outside beauty.In fact,the concept of beauty is quite rich in its content.It should include many virtues ,like diligence,honesty and so on,which should form the real mainstreamof our spiritual life.However,nowdays people in mounting numbers lay more attention on the outside beauty,ignoring the cultivation of thier inner hearts.The practice will mislead the young who are to develop a correct concept of beauty.
Hence,it is imperative for us to take drastic measures to reverse this disturbing trend.To begin whit,we should promote the public awareness of inner beauty.If humanity has made some headways in realizing
that people whose inner heart is sublime are nearer to success whatever difficulty or situation we are confronted with ,we may well believe that humans will focus on the cultivation of the inner heart.In addition,the relevant authorities should speak highly of people whose behavior exert enormous positive influence on the society,which can set a good example to the young.

阿卡迪默斯 · 發表于 2014-10-20 06:29

作文隨手寫，老師來評分英語一

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馮乖 · 發表于 2014-10-20 08:08

The table precisely depicts the difference of college students' financial source in America and China. What makes the table surprsing lies in the fact that Chinese students'financial source dominatedly comes from tjeir family.
Nodoubted.the table conveys us a startling massage that Chinese students far more depend on their family. Based on the 90% income sourse of Chinese studengts we can clearly relize the problem Chinese students underlyying face. As an adult who will join in job in a nearly future,Chinese students are tightly in need of indepence.
Hence,it is vital for us to take effective measures. On hte one hand, we should appeal to our government to increase scholarship for college students. More importantly, we must cultivate college students' sense of making money by himself.

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張潔純是Nemo · 發表于 2014-10-20 08:23

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冬草818 · 發表于 2014-10-20 09:53

有沒有知道的？就是我要考河師大的中國古代史，它的考試內容里包括中國近代史么？還是只考古代史的范圍？

方會巖 · 發表于 2014-10-20 10:41

鬧鬧的發表于 2014-10-18 22:52
英語二作文

鬧鬧的，你傳上來的作文看不太清楚哦，建議重新發一份，或者直接敲上來電子版的吧

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