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haru11 · 發表于 2014-10-19 17:19

haru11 發表于 2014-10-19 17:13
謝謝！請評論。*^_^*

剛才那兩張不太清楚，這是重新拍的，謝謝！

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秋日陽光91 · 發表于 2014-10-19 17:50

說我發的內容有不良信息發不了啊就一篇英語作文哪來的不良信息啊圖片也傳不了

行走的豬油膏 · 發表于 2014-10-19 17:50

寫的英語一，麻煩老師批改～謝謝啦！

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向日葵yi · 發表于 2014-10-19 17:51

我寫的作文怎么沒法提交呢？頁面顯示有不良信息？好奇怪啊！怎么辦呢/

行走的豬油膏 · 發表于 2014-10-19 17:53

行走的豬油膏發表于 2014-10-19 17:50
寫的英語一，麻煩老師批改～謝謝啦！

圖片沒轉過來，重新發。。麻煩老師啦～

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向日葵yi · 發表于 2014-10-19 17:53

秋日陽光91 發表于 2014-10-19 17:50
說我發的內容有不良信息發不了啊就一篇英語作文哪來的不良信息啊圖片也傳不了
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我的也是這種情況啊，額·····

瀟灑黃夢帆 · 發表于 2014-10-19 18:29

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我不知會遇見lee · 發表于 2014-10-19 18:38

作文隨手寫，老師來評分學渣求老師狠狠拍

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haru11 · 發表于 2014-10-19 18:41

發的圖片太不清楚了，打在這里吧，謝謝老師！
wearing sunglasses and gorgeous dress,a yong beautiful girl throws the peel tothe ground after eating up the banana,by contrast, an physical-challenged man dressed casually picks up the litter and makes the street return clean.And there is a topic below the cartoon which says the true beauty is not about appearance.
As a matter of fact,there are so many people inour country dressed in brand clothes and wearing jewelry tomake them looked pretty,forgetting to do the same thing for environment.considering this issue,I can think of no better examplication than the following one.One day I was studying in the classroom when a girl came in and sit in front of me.She wiped the desk with a tissue again and again and then threw it to the floor.I always make my things tiny so it made me feel a little sick.We are people in society,which means we should take others' feeling into account. apparently,there are someone have not done that.Including throwing litter to the street,walking on the grass and so on,they have done many harmful things to our surrounding.
As the person with social morality,we should spare noeffort to make our surroundings stay clean and beautiful.For instance,if we see somebody throwing litter next time,we should remind them not doing the same thing again.Besides,perfect the penalty method of behavior about ruining environment can help a lot to solve the problem.

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小小旖旎 · 發表于 2014-10-19 18:52

小黃瓜2014 發表于 2014-10-17 17:15
從小學開始，就討厭寫作文，后來才知道英語作文才是真的痛啊

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